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I feel a bit down.
So, someone has just sort of offended me, or at least criticized me to an amount that might give me stress, like how AndrewMartinD got depressed after losing Haunted Library Round 1.
So I watching some of Ralph Sepe Jr.'s film reviews, and if you know my Amazing Spider-Man 2 review, you will know him as "the king of TASM2 SUCKS". Anyway, he did a video called "Reasons MINIONS (2013) SUCKS!!!', and I Hate Everything, who I sort of follow, commented that he wanted to be besties with Ralph. I responded to IHE with:
So, someone has just sort of offended me, or at least criticized me to an amount that might give me stress, like how AndrewMartinD got depressed after losing Haunted Library Round 1.
So I watching some of Ralph Sepe Jr.'s film reviews, and if you know my Amazing Spider-Man 2 review, you will know him as "the king of TASM2 SUCKS". Anyway, he did a video called "Reasons MINIONS (2013) SUCKS!!!', and I Hate Everything, who I sort of follow, commented that he wanted to be besties with Ralph. I responded to IHE with:
I respect your opinions. After all, you hate everything. I LOVED The Amazing Spider-Man 2. It's not as bad as everyone says it is. But Ralph...his opinions are complete shepherd. I have a deviantART account, and even I don't go insane because you hate it. But his opinions influence others, and I'm doing a review of TASM2 defending it, and I constantly bring Ralph up, mostly because he is an easy target. Think about it...he shows negative comments in his reviews: like "ralph r u a fagit" or "you are just jumping on the bandwagon".
And it's true. I like I Hate Everything's videos. Sure, I may not agree, but at least he knows that no one will agree with him, a sort of thing I did in my TASM2 reviews. I wanted my critic persona to have a hint of madness inside of him.
Anyway, someone asked if he could see my review, and I told him it was here, on DA. He asked for a link, but I, wanting to remain anonymous, instead asked him to search "amazing spider man 2 review". Someone named Dizzie responded to me and immediately knew which one it was:
"I found it. It's really bad."
I was very shocked, and then the guy who asked me for a link asked Dizzie for a link, and he/she said:
"Search 'Amazing Spider-man 2 review' sort by newest. The ones by mrpaintravioli.
I can't link because it'll get marked as spam."
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And with that, I feel like my life on DA is at risk.
I asked Dizzie if I could improve them, but the review itself might deviate too much from the original intent. I wanted my critic persona to be a bit off his rocker, and have a sort of side that is completely insane, the same side that hates Michael Bay to pieces, is disgusted by TASM2 hate, and other stuff.
I fear that with my sort of weird attitude to people who hate TASM2, even though AspiringCreator and that makoto guy who hates Metroid: Other M opened my eyes and allowed me to approach the topic with more maturity, might result in me ending up becoming PrincessElizabeth013, a person I am glad was removed, or maybe even worse: xNickkitheHedgiex, some DA user who I actually was in a conflict with. And I was one of the ones who got her out of DA. It seems as though I might be gone from DA, but I wish that doesn't happen. I'm a great artist who acknowledges flaws, and if I leave now, some of my future plans that I wish to show to the public i.e. the Planet X Trilogy itself, the remaining part of Spider-Man: Reincarnation, a set of Transformers fanfics entitled "The New Transformers", a new set of idea Halloween remakes inspired by my odd philosophy of "finish what the creator started" (John Carpenter began an idea for a Halloween anthology with each one being a different story, an idea I am personally quite impressed with, seeing all the possibilities for horror stories centering on the holiday), Alpha/Omega, a series of film noir stories a la Blade Runner, more reviews, and even the RPG thing I told crazyshiro about.
I will now unveil the RPG concept, as I was waiting to unveil it by the time Haunted Library OCT ends: Dark Star: Return of Planet X
Dark Star: Return of Planet X would be a JRPG-styled thing a la Final Fantasy, the Lunar series, or EA's Harry Potter GBC/GBA handhelds (Sorcerer's Stone, Chamber of Secrets, Prisoner of Azkaban), centering on AU versions of my OCs: Connor Stark (Assault on Dulce), Wendy Whitman (Assault on Dulce), Ruby Robinson (my entry for Haunted Library), Ronald Brooks (mentioned in Secrets of the Library #2), and Sedna Smithsonian (an OC I intend to enter to Tower Tournament this summer). AU differences: Connor is not sick, and his father died of cancer instead of H900N1. Wendy is not a fugitive, instead she is a shy but crazy scientist who lives with Connor. Ronald is...just the same as himself in possible HL followups. The only difference is that he is less of a comedian and more of a helper. He even resurrects Ruby when she falls unconscious in one bit. Ruby has not even set foot in the Haunted Library, met Cognitio and the others, and is still a bit of a wallflower. Again, she is a wallflower, but not a coward. The only reason anyone would make Ruby a coward a la Peter Pettigrew (as in Ruby would join the bad guys and betray her friends in fear of losing her life) would be if anyone got the rights to do whatever they want with my characters, and ruined everything Modern SpongeBob style.
The story centers around Connor Stark, a college student (age 23, he was originally 26 in PLXT: Assault on Dulce), and his roommate Wendy Whitman (age 22, originally 25), discovering an artifact inside a cave underneath the subway system. The artifact unlocks several keys to the locations of several clues to a mysterious event set to occur on July 17th. Connor and Wendy are also somehow given abilities related to lightning and water, because...RPG. They are then caught in a seemingly endless chase after the FBI gets involved. Connor and Wendy talk about the artifact and all the weird stuff to their friends Ruby Robinson (age 22, originally 27 in HLOCT) and Ronald Brooks (age 22, originally 27 in the backstory to Ruby's character). During a chase, Connor and friends run into a mysterious woman named Sedna Smithsonian (age 35, no alterations at all), who might know exactly what the artifact and clues might lead to. The clues lead to the search for secret keys found in: the lost city of Atlantis, the hidden MJ12 base underneath Dulce, New Mexico, an abandoned mansion in the outskirts of the city this takes place in, an old cabin inside Scape Ore Swamp (a location in South Carolina), and in the hidden subways inside the city. Eventually, the clues lead to them heading to an abandoned church in the city, where a secret underground room contains a cylinder containing a blue liquid, a weird computer, and what seems to be a portal. Using the computer, the party discovers that the clues were leading to the awakening of a demon named Ornitholestes (yes, as in the dinosaur) who is inside the liquid. The portal opens once the Sun and Moon come into a special alignment ( Moon----Earth-------Sun) and an extra body is to appear: Planet X a.k.a. Nibiru, Wormwood, Hercolobus, Bluebonnet, and whatever the slag you want to call it. Realizing that the Planet is to cause Armageddon, the team goes inside the portal to face the evil...
Who knows what will happen, but I know this: all things must come to an end. This might come to an end abruptly. And if it does, my will of sorts.
To Andrew Martin a.k.a. AndrewMartinD, I leave all rights to Ruby Robinson, Ronald Brooks, and all related characters, and the illustration rights to the Planet X Trilogy. Note: Share rights with IntroducingEmy.
To David Williams III a.k.a. AspiringCreator, I leave Spider-Man Reincarnation, The New Transformers, and the text rights to the Planet X Trilogy.
To Tristan T. Lund a.k.a. TheChitinousTeen, I leave the Halloween anthology idea and text right Ravioli Reviews
To julvett, I give the rights to Weird Adventures of Harry Potter and Friends, as we both like to make comics out of J.K. Rowling's creations.
So yeah, basically the only way for me to live on outside DA is to divorce myself from my own creations, fan-made or not. I feel so much regret...
This is not an April Fools joke, as that date has passed.
Sincerely, Andres Acosta a.k.a.
Writer, artist, synth artist, pianist, geek, Potterhead, astronomy buff, conspiracy theorist, Transfan, comic book nerd, Nintendo gamer, useless creator of bad "art".
P.S. To AleximusPrime and Cylinder-the-Autobot:
I know you are out there. If you ever read this, I want you to know that I am sorry for my behavior. I have improved, but who knows if I will improve more.
And it's true. I like I Hate Everything's videos. Sure, I may not agree, but at least he knows that no one will agree with him, a sort of thing I did in my TASM2 reviews. I wanted my critic persona to have a hint of madness inside of him.
Anyway, someone asked if he could see my review, and I told him it was here, on DA. He asked for a link, but I, wanting to remain anonymous, instead asked him to search "amazing spider man 2 review". Someone named Dizzie responded to me and immediately knew which one it was:
"I found it. It's really bad."
I was very shocked, and then the guy who asked me for a link asked Dizzie for a link, and he/she said:
"Search 'Amazing Spider-man 2 review' sort by newest. The ones by mrpaintravioli.
I can't link because it'll get marked as spam."
------
And with that, I feel like my life on DA is at risk.
I asked Dizzie if I could improve them, but the review itself might deviate too much from the original intent. I wanted my critic persona to be a bit off his rocker, and have a sort of side that is completely insane, the same side that hates Michael Bay to pieces, is disgusted by TASM2 hate, and other stuff.
I fear that with my sort of weird attitude to people who hate TASM2, even though AspiringCreator and that makoto guy who hates Metroid: Other M opened my eyes and allowed me to approach the topic with more maturity, might result in me ending up becoming PrincessElizabeth013, a person I am glad was removed, or maybe even worse: xNickkitheHedgiex, some DA user who I actually was in a conflict with. And I was one of the ones who got her out of DA. It seems as though I might be gone from DA, but I wish that doesn't happen. I'm a great artist who acknowledges flaws, and if I leave now, some of my future plans that I wish to show to the public i.e. the Planet X Trilogy itself, the remaining part of Spider-Man: Reincarnation, a set of Transformers fanfics entitled "The New Transformers", a new set of idea Halloween remakes inspired by my odd philosophy of "finish what the creator started" (John Carpenter began an idea for a Halloween anthology with each one being a different story, an idea I am personally quite impressed with, seeing all the possibilities for horror stories centering on the holiday), Alpha/Omega, a series of film noir stories a la Blade Runner, more reviews, and even the RPG thing I told crazyshiro about.
I will now unveil the RPG concept, as I was waiting to unveil it by the time Haunted Library OCT ends: Dark Star: Return of Planet X
Dark Star: Return of Planet X would be a JRPG-styled thing a la Final Fantasy, the Lunar series, or EA's Harry Potter GBC/GBA handhelds (Sorcerer's Stone, Chamber of Secrets, Prisoner of Azkaban), centering on AU versions of my OCs: Connor Stark (Assault on Dulce), Wendy Whitman (Assault on Dulce), Ruby Robinson (my entry for Haunted Library), Ronald Brooks (mentioned in Secrets of the Library #2), and Sedna Smithsonian (an OC I intend to enter to Tower Tournament this summer). AU differences: Connor is not sick, and his father died of cancer instead of H900N1. Wendy is not a fugitive, instead she is a shy but crazy scientist who lives with Connor. Ronald is...just the same as himself in possible HL followups. The only difference is that he is less of a comedian and more of a helper. He even resurrects Ruby when she falls unconscious in one bit. Ruby has not even set foot in the Haunted Library, met Cognitio and the others, and is still a bit of a wallflower. Again, she is a wallflower, but not a coward. The only reason anyone would make Ruby a coward a la Peter Pettigrew (as in Ruby would join the bad guys and betray her friends in fear of losing her life) would be if anyone got the rights to do whatever they want with my characters, and ruined everything Modern SpongeBob style.
The story centers around Connor Stark, a college student (age 23, he was originally 26 in PLXT: Assault on Dulce), and his roommate Wendy Whitman (age 22, originally 25), discovering an artifact inside a cave underneath the subway system. The artifact unlocks several keys to the locations of several clues to a mysterious event set to occur on July 17th. Connor and Wendy are also somehow given abilities related to lightning and water, because...RPG. They are then caught in a seemingly endless chase after the FBI gets involved. Connor and Wendy talk about the artifact and all the weird stuff to their friends Ruby Robinson (age 22, originally 27 in HLOCT) and Ronald Brooks (age 22, originally 27 in the backstory to Ruby's character). During a chase, Connor and friends run into a mysterious woman named Sedna Smithsonian (age 35, no alterations at all), who might know exactly what the artifact and clues might lead to. The clues lead to the search for secret keys found in: the lost city of Atlantis, the hidden MJ12 base underneath Dulce, New Mexico, an abandoned mansion in the outskirts of the city this takes place in, an old cabin inside Scape Ore Swamp (a location in South Carolina), and in the hidden subways inside the city. Eventually, the clues lead to them heading to an abandoned church in the city, where a secret underground room contains a cylinder containing a blue liquid, a weird computer, and what seems to be a portal. Using the computer, the party discovers that the clues were leading to the awakening of a demon named Ornitholestes (yes, as in the dinosaur) who is inside the liquid. The portal opens once the Sun and Moon come into a special alignment ( Moon----Earth-------Sun) and an extra body is to appear: Planet X a.k.a. Nibiru, Wormwood, Hercolobus, Bluebonnet, and whatever the slag you want to call it. Realizing that the Planet is to cause Armageddon, the team goes inside the portal to face the evil...
Who knows what will happen, but I know this: all things must come to an end. This might come to an end abruptly. And if it does, my will of sorts.
To Andrew Martin a.k.a. AndrewMartinD, I leave all rights to Ruby Robinson, Ronald Brooks, and all related characters, and the illustration rights to the Planet X Trilogy. Note: Share rights with IntroducingEmy.
To David Williams III a.k.a. AspiringCreator, I leave Spider-Man Reincarnation, The New Transformers, and the text rights to the Planet X Trilogy.
To Tristan T. Lund a.k.a. TheChitinousTeen, I leave the Halloween anthology idea and text right Ravioli Reviews
To julvett, I give the rights to Weird Adventures of Harry Potter and Friends, as we both like to make comics out of J.K. Rowling's creations.
So yeah, basically the only way for me to live on outside DA is to divorce myself from my own creations, fan-made or not. I feel so much regret...
This is not an April Fools joke, as that date has passed.
Sincerely, Andres Acosta a.k.a.
Writer, artist, synth artist, pianist, geek, Potterhead, astronomy buff, conspiracy theorist, Transfan, comic book nerd, Nintendo gamer, useless creator of bad "art".
P.S. To AleximusPrime and Cylinder-the-Autobot:
I know you are out there. If you ever read this, I want you to know that I am sorry for my behavior. I have improved, but who knows if I will improve more.
Art Feature thing!(First ten people who comment)
RULES: I will feature the first ten users who comment on this journal below. Next to their avatars, I'll link three of my favorite gallery pieces with full thumbnails. If you comment here you must make a journal like this and do the same thing as I have, putting me in the first(next available) slot. Those who don't comply with the rules will be omitted, no exceptions.
1. ~ASP-Ian (https://www.deviantart.com/asp-ian)
2. :iconcheesythicdoritolegs: (I don't know if this is technically cheating...)
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Very Funny Dude
Me Grimlock get to do thing because tagged by ~AxisOfRotation (https://www.deviantart.com/axisofrotation)
42 Questions You've Probably Never Been Asked: -
1. Are you an outgoing person?
I dunno.
2. Dream Job?
Filmmaker. Definitely trying to avoid doing ridiculous Michael Bay-style action films and more or less a mix of Alfonso Cuaron art films and John Carpenter...well...80's shit.
3. Favorite Colors?
Green, blue, teal
4. Have you ever wanted to change myself?
I have no idea.
5. Favorite Music genre?
A lot of old school shit (and only REALLY GOOD new stuff, which is rare)
6. Are you a morning person?
I dunno.
7. Daytime or Nightime?
W
Transformers: Re-Energized ideas so far...
#TowerTournamentOCT (https://www.deviantart.com/towertournamentoct) We'll get to you later, Mir, Lulzy, Click, Mag, etc. I have to talk about a fanfic.
So...:iconautobotsplz: :icondecepticonsplz: Transformers Re-Energized. I have a lot of ideas, so I guess now would be a good time to explain some of them.
First off, the story and inspiration.
The idea was to make a reimagining of Transformers that would try to be a mid-ground between Transformers: Prime and Animated. Not very dark, but still a bit edgy and not too lighthearted. I was also thinking about adding references to original/scrapped concepts in the production of Transformers G1 and Bayformers, such as Ratchet being a girl,
Updates and stuff...not really important.
This was originally going to be for those really cringey reviews of mine...but then you have my OCT shit, trying to write a fanfiction, and more.
First off, #TowerTournamentOCT (https://www.deviantart.com/towertournamentoct) My story isn't really going well. The conspiracy theory I based the story on has some plot holes when compared to reality, my characters are two-dimensional stereotypes, and I need help developing a story. My biggest fear for the OCT was that my story would become a mess with terrible characters, and it seems to be coming true. (insert Decepticon theme here. Not the awesome Vince DiCola one, the ominous Steve Jablonsky one)
Second, my dad has gone to Denver beca
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Well... crap, this is depressing.
I think I've thought about this on more than one occasion about what would happen if someone checked out something I did and told me that my work either sucked or just was meh. In fact, I remember how people reacted to my hatred towards Absalon despite the fact that I did put in the description that the intent wasn't to offend and honestly like you, I did feel upset somewhat but of course, it was for a different reason.
As far as fearing you'll be like these different users is concerned, I don't believe you will as long as you remember my words and others and try to improve. It definitely is a little concerning to see that your review of TASM2 could possibly put you at risk but unfortunately, I feared this would happen considering I expressed one of my main problems with the review was that the style overall was just odd like it felt like Nostalgia Critic with the crazy dial cranked up way too high and to see that unfortunately has to come back to bite you is a saddening.
I'm honestly hoping this isn't the end since you do make amazing content.
I think I've thought about this on more than one occasion about what would happen if someone checked out something I did and told me that my work either sucked or just was meh. In fact, I remember how people reacted to my hatred towards Absalon despite the fact that I did put in the description that the intent wasn't to offend and honestly like you, I did feel upset somewhat but of course, it was for a different reason.
As far as fearing you'll be like these different users is concerned, I don't believe you will as long as you remember my words and others and try to improve. It definitely is a little concerning to see that your review of TASM2 could possibly put you at risk but unfortunately, I feared this would happen considering I expressed one of my main problems with the review was that the style overall was just odd like it felt like Nostalgia Critic with the crazy dial cranked up way too high and to see that unfortunately has to come back to bite you is a saddening.
I'm honestly hoping this isn't the end since you do make amazing content.